User talk:Vaatkins/sandbox

Sahana's Peer Review
Hey, I would suggest creating a better Introduction to your page. I think it does not outline everything you plan to cover in the entire article. I would also suggest you create better sub-headings, and make sure to outline them so that the index lines up with your sections. I also think you should add more references, and make sure to cite them the way Wikipedia does. You should have in-text citations. The references tool on Wikipedia is very useful for this.

Sahana