User talk:Valemadz/sandbox

Paleolithic Diet This page seems to be in a pretty good place. Most of the references are active links and the information presented is neutral, thorough, and supported by references. There is a lot about the history and origination of the diet but I think it could use more modern day material. Perhaps a section on the 'popularity of the diet' could be a good addition to the article. I think the article could also benefit from an expansion of the 'health effects' section; subheadings of Positive and Negative Effects would be a nice way to organize it. I think the article might be slightly out of date; it claims there have not been major studies regarding the health effects of a paleo diet, but I'm sure there is relevant research published. The best part of this article is the balance of counter arguments so no one viewpoint is vastly overrepresented. I also think the article does a good job of redirecting people to relevant, similar diets. --Saritaben (talk) 23:15, 17 March 2018 (UTC)saritaben