User talk:VanceJordan

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Jeff Nicholson (September 30)
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Flat Out (talk) 06:53, 30 September 2015 (UTC)

Flat Out-

Hello. Thank you for the feedback on the Jeff Nicholson page. I am looking into making the suggested changes to the page. While I do that, I wanted to show you the old version of the page- it has been significantly revised already, I'm not sure if you were able to check it out.

Here's a link: http://deletionpedia.org/en/Jeff_Nicholson

Thank you for your time, Vance VanceJordan (talk) 01:07, 4 October 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jeff Nicholson (October 17)
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SwisterTwister  talk  06:54, 17 October 2015 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Jeff Nicholson has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Jeff Nicholson. Thanks! Flat Out (talk) 09:47, 23 October 2015 (UTC)

Flat Out- Hello- Thank you for your recent (and original) feedback, it made things clearer for me. I figured out how to put the web links right in the footnote section rather than duplicated in the external links section. That looks much cleaner, thanks. I think that and your original request for more references is covered (virtually every statement has a reference now). The other editor who declined it said it needed more verifiable news sources and less interviews. I would like to point out that most of the history referred to here is pre-internet, so it only seems logical that my seven news print references outnumbers my few web news references. With 20 references for five paragraphs, I think this is really solid article when I compare it to other similar wiki articles. Do you agree and can you release it now? Thank you for your time.

VanceJordan (talk) 23:51, 24 October 2015 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Jeff Nicholson has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Jeff Nicholson. Thanks! Flat Out (talk) 02:30, 27 October 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jeff Nicholson (October 28)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by LaMona was:

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LaMona (talk) 04:01, 28 October 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jeff Nicholson has been accepted
 Jeff Nicholson, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Flat Out (talk) 02:02, 2 November 2015 (UTC)
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