User talk:Vanessaleon

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Tone in your recent edit
Hi Vanessa and welcome to Wikipedia! I reverted your edit to Jaclyn Hill because several parts of the changes (e.g. "Jaclyn's maiden name is..." and "They got married on...") were not in keeping with the encyclopedic tone expected in a Wikipedia article and referring to Hill by her given name goes against the Manual of Style. For more information please check out WP:TONE and the Wikipedia Manual of Style. Happy editing! RA 0808 talkcontribs 17:31, 27 September 2016 (UTC)

Week 4 - Possible Article Topics
Here are some articles that I may be interested in using for my final Wikipedia definition/pageL


 * Analog Data
 * ECT Data - Electronic Card Transaction Data
 * Observant Participation
 * Automated Data
 * Automated Surveillance

Week 5 - Finalize topic/find sources
I decided to chose the Electronic Card Transaction Data (ECT Data) article as my topic. I plan on contributing a clear definition for this topic, a background on the uses and history of ECT, how it came to be, why it is or isn't a smart technology, and how it connects to big data.

Some sources that I plan on using are the following:

The Development of Electronic Card Transactions Statistics paper Taking Electronic Transactions to the next level Article Electronic Financial Transaction Cards and Methods - Factivia The Data Revolution - Chapter 7: The Governmental and Business Rationale for Big Data Transaction Security for E-commerce Application Examining the Usefulness of the Electronic Card Transactions Data as an Indicator for the New Zealand Economy
 * https://editorialexpress.com/cgi-bin/conference/download.cgi?db_name=NZAE2007&paper_id=83
 * http://journals2.scholarsportal.info.proxy.library.carleton.ca/pdf/09652590/v16i0002/10_tetttnl.xml
 * , . (10/31/2012). Patent Issued for Electronic Financial Transaction Cards and Methods. Journal of engineering (Atlanta, Ga.). . p.3714.
 * https://global-factiva-com.proxy.library.carleton.ca/ga/default.aspx
 * Kitchen, R. (2014). "The Data Revolution - Chapter 7: The Governmental and Business Rationale for Big Data", Sage Publications Ltd. Book. 113-127.
 * Rane, Pradnya. (06/01/2012). "Transaction Security for E-commerce Application", International journal of electronics and computer science engineering. (1)3. p.1720 - 1726.
 * Allan, C. (July 2013). "Examining the Usefulness of the Electronic Card Transactions Data as an Indicator for the New Zealand Economy", Motu Economic and Public Policy Research. 1-18.
 * http://www.nzae.org.nz/wp-content/uploads/2014/05/Allan_NZAE_paper_2013_-_Corey_Allan.pdf