User talk:Vanessgu/sandbox

Ale's Peer Review
Great work -- I found your article super interesting! I thought you did a wonderful job of compiling an extremely comprehensive summary of this Bill and I am very impressed that you were involved in the work that led to the passage of this Bill :) I like that the article is balanced and includes the perspectives of proponents and opponents of the bill, and I appreciated your summary of the before and after state of the law.

I only have a couple minor suggestions. Perhaps you can re-title the last section to "Prior Legislative Attempts" or something along those lines, to indicate that the bills you mention in that section were never passed into law. I might also suggest making the "Comparison by Occupation of Overtime Provisions Prior to AB 1066" a sub-section of the "The State of California Law Prior to the Passage of AB 1066" section, since it describes the state of affairs prior to the passage of AB 1066.

I am really interested in learning more about the impact of this bill (on the agricultural industry and on its workers). Do you know if there have been any impact studies conducted and published since its passage? Since the bill lays out a 4-year phased rollout of changes, the next researcher who picks up this article should definitely look into adding a section on the impact of the bill since studies will be more reliable with the passing of time.

Once again, awesome job!Alel19 (talk) 06:38, 30 May 2018 (UTC)