User talk:Vanilla.swirl14/Rough Sandbox

Alex Peer Review "Oppression"
1. Satisfied with importance of topic? Yes, different forms were stated and defined. 2. The lead does not reflect the most important information. 3. Nothing in the article is redundant. 4. Organized well, in good order.

(Acg064 (talk) 21:15, 3 November 2018 (UTC))
 * Thank you for your feedback I greatly appreciate it, in regard to the lead not reflecting the most important information, what would you consider to be the most important information and how could I make it more apparent?
 * Vanilla.swirl14 (talk) 02:53, 13 November 2018 (UTC)