User talk:Vansam823/Brownfield land/Ari. gg02 Peer Review

About the peer review
Hello Ari. ggo2,

thank you for the feedback! I took into account all your notes from the lead and corrected them. If you have the time and don't mind, would you be able to check the new lead I created in the published article and let me know how it looks, please? Nervous about making all these edits, aha. Also thanks for catching the inconsistent b and capital B for brownfield, I made the edits and changed them all to a minuscule b.

For the United Kingdom section, I added your suggestions to the article. As for the rest of the article and extra notes, there is a whole other section on the main article page titled "Brownfield status by country". That section includes more details on brownfield land by country and the rest of the article covers the questions you asked in your conclusion. A lot of the issues with those sections and why I have not included them in my draft yet is because they are missing a lot of citations and it is going to require some hunting before I can make further changes.

Again, thank you for your helpful peer review :) Vansam823 (talk) 18:26, 24 March 2023 (UTC)