User talk:Vapmachado/Comment draft

Hi,

Its a long philosophical essay. I ruminate over such texts. Sometimes for months. I agree to a lot of what you say. I'm yet to pinpoint my points of disagreement. Its good that a common user thinks deeply over the philosophy of and for Wikipedia.

I have added titles to your rules - feel free to revert or modify. The structure they add allows that point to be examined apart from the text as a whole.

You may like to reword your decency paragrapgh from gender point of view. It may be read to imply certin amount of indecency is oay in front of males but not females, wherein you will be drawn into a debate aside from your intended subject of discussion.

Will reply by email, later. Happy editing, AshLin (talk) 16:26, 16 November 2010 (UTC)