User talk:Varisara.spy

online training
--Taweetham (talk) 19:59, 26 January 2018 (UTC)
 * --Taweetham (talk) 11:58, 27 January 2018 (UTC)


 * I have completed all 3 modules already. Varisara.spy (talk) 14:00, 27 January 2018 (UTC)


 * Hi Spy. Your have gone through the slides and answered the multiple-choice questions.  However, you have not completed the interactive tutorials.  Please use the links above to complete the tasks. --Taweetham (talk) 16:17, 27 January 2018 (UTC)


 * --Taweetham (talk) 17:37, 27 January 2018 (UTC)


 * Could you please check I think I have done 3 of them properly? Varisara.spy (talk) 08:28, 28 January 2018 (UTC)

Topic proposal
--Taweetham (talk) 20:06, 26 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Your topic, Laboratory tube sent by email is accepted. --Taweetham (talk) 09:10, 28 January 2018 (UTC)

First draft
--Taweetham (talk) 20:14, 26 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Your draft is borderline but I let you pass this time. You need to provide references to support your writing. --Taweetham (talk) 00:47, 3 February 2018 (UTC)

First edit on the article namespace
--Taweetham (talk) 00:47, 3 February 2018 (UTC)

Hi from your reviewer
Hello Varisara.spy, welcome to Wikipedia! I am glad to be your reviewer for the ICCH224 course. Please feel free to contact me via my talk page if you have any questions about anything. Cheers, --Pilarbini (talk) 06:57, 3 February 2018 (UTC)

Reverted edits
Please see the article's https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Laboratory_tube&action=history. You need to have proper references and the content must be encyclopedic. --Taweetham (talk) 05:53, 8 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Do you want to change your topic? Try Spouted Can (Eureka can) instead? --Taweetham (talk) 06:59, 8 February 2018 (UTC)


 * Why can’t I continue working on “lab tube”? Varisara.spy (talk) 07:49, 8 February 2018 (UTC)


 * May I change to “Foodomics” instead since it’s also related to my major? Varisara.spy (talk) 11:52, 8 February 2018 (UTC)


 * Sure. Please change and work on this new topic asap. --Taweetham (talk) 13:55, 8 February 2018 (UTC)

I have already moved my article to public page. If it is deleted to become less than 1000 bytes, will I be kicked out? Varisara.spy (talk) 03:41, 9 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Could you please have a look at my article and see if everything is alright? I have already changed what you told me during the lab, but I just want to make sure that my article will not be deleted again. Thank you.

Comments on foodomics article
Hello Varisara.spy,

Thank you for your contribution on foodomics article, this is indeed a fascinating field. Here are some suggestions.

General comments: Overall it is well written, but consider reorganizing the content by dividing it into clear sections with each paragraph supporting the same main idea.

Specific comments:
 * Consider removing first part of this sentence as it is similar to the first sentence "Foodomics, in which its suffix -omics refers to a study of science, requires the combination of food chemistry, biological science, and data analysis."
 * And this would make a good second sentence
 * Move sentences around so that the year is in chronological order
 * Don't think that the " four main areas of omics" need to be in a list. I would make it into one sentence.
 * OR it could be good to keep the list and add short description about each area
 * The major aims of the development of Foodomics deserves its own section as it doesn't really belong to the advantages section.

Hope you find this useful, feel free to contact me if you have further questions. --Pilarbini (talk) 10:37, 10 February 2018 (UTC)
 * I have already adjusted some of it but I'm not really sure if that's what you meant. Could you please have a look? And for a short description, I have only put in only 2 from 4, just for you to have a look first if that's what you suggested. If that's right, I'll put in the rest.

Thank you so much


 * I rearranged the content and also edited the structure for short description. Please use the code to notify me and also don't forget to use --~ to sign your comments :D --Pilarbini (talk) 07:45, 12 February 2018 (UTC)

Thanks for your contribution to the article.

Please have a look at similar articles on Wikipedia e.g. Transcriptomics technologies and links from List_of_omics_topics_in_biology and learn from these examples. --Taweetham (talk) 03:20, 18 February 2018 (UTC)
 * 1) Please watch for edits made to the article by other Wikipedians.  On the history page, you will be able to see their comments and changes.
 * 2) Please provide edit summary every time you save a page.
 * 3) Please carefully read WP:NOT and make sure that your article has an encyclopedia tone.
 * 4) Please format your references properly.  For example, use cite journal for the cover page citation.'

Tag
@pilarbini If I got tags that say clarification needed and dubious, can I just go ahead and edit my article while deleting the tags? Is it appropriate? --Varisara.spy

Meetup
You are invited to the meet up. --Taweetham (talk) 08:32, 16 March 2018 (UTC)