User talk:Varmint256/Exometeorology

David's Peer Review
The lead does well in highlighting the main focus of the article and what the reader can expect. After reading the article, I feel satisfied in knowing the importance of exometeorology, as the lead reflects the most relevant information. The lead primarily comprises of information found in the Observational and Theoretical Foundations section, as this section contains the bulk of the article's information. There is no missing or redundant information.

There is a lot of good information in the Observational and Theoretical Foundations section, but some subheadings to separate the four paragraphs present may aid the reader in quickly locating more specific location they are looking for. Subheadings such as "recent findings", "shortcomings of research", or " discovery" may be of use. Another idea could be creating two different sections for Observational Foundations and Theoretical Foundations.

The Theorized Weather section at the end of the article could use more information. As this is still an emerging field of study, if there is not a sufficient amount of outside information available, this section could be signified by a subheading. In addiction, covering information about more recent findings may be of use since the last information the author includes is from 2012.

The author does well in maintaining a neutral viewpoint. While describing the shortcomings of research conducted right now, the organizations involved are not frowned upon. There is no language present that favors one viewpoint or another.

Many sources were used in writing this article. The formatting is accurate and the links available allow the reader to easily locate more elaborate information about exometeorology. These sources seem to be credible and do well in portraying the ever-changing information related to exometeorology.

Overall, this article very much interested me. I hope to apply the author's easy to understand language in explaining a niche topic to my article. I am excited to find out more about exometeorlogy as more research is conducted in the future!

Dneal03 (talk) 18:16, 1 April 2023 (UTC)