User talk:Varunko/sandbox

Izzy's Peer Review
In the first section, "Attempts at narrowing the racial achievement gap," it is a bit vague, so maybe find some examples of explanations for it and some effects it causes. Adding an example at the end when it came to issues was good. For "Standards-based reform and No Child Left Behind," maybe find an example of a time that a school was reprimanded right after you say they could face sanctions. Maybe also show the process, if there is one, of a school changing their ways with the "Adequate Yearly Progress." The RTTT section looks good. Under "School-based reform," I would not change anything. Examples and reasons for what is mentioned in the section are good. For "Teacher-based reform," maybe make it a little bit longer. Possibly add challenges for teachers when it comes to this. For the final section, "Investment in early childhood," maybe find an article from which you can pull research and data facts from.Isabellasiragusa (talk) 14:34, 23 October 2018 (UTC)