User talk:Vazi97/sandbox

Those look like great sources.128.187.116.27 (talk) 16:18, 20 October 2020 (UTC) Snowwhite5567 (talk) 16:19, 20 October 2020 (UTC)

I'm sure you'll be able to cover a lot of stuff with these sources, nice job! ExasperatedOctopus (talk) 16:23, 20 October 2020 (UTC)

I really like that you added a section on structure--that was a key component missing from the original article. Great work. I think it would be a great addition if you could add a figure showing the structure of the protein. Snowwhite5567 (talk) 23:24, 16 November 2020 (UTC)

Good job! I filled out your peer review sheet here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Vazi97/Myelin_basic_protein/ExasperatedOctopus_Peer_Review But to sum it up, it looks like you're doing good things. The only thing I'd suggest is using more of your sources somehow, whether that's citing more things or extending your paragraph is up to you. You also might consider making your phrases a little simpler and easy to follow, since the average wikipedian is going to be trying to read it. ExasperatedOctopus (talk) 15:58, 19 November 2020 (UTC)

Just checking in again, and it looks like you've already published your changes to the article. If you are still making edits though, it could be helpful to explain what sorts of experiments have shown the beta sheet/amphipathic helical structure in your last sentence, perhaps with a reference. You have made some really meaningful contributions to the original article! Snowwhite5567 (talk) 19:56, 12 December 2020 (UTC)