User talk:Vecenya/sandbox

Procrastination in society just shows how occupied our minds are without thinking about what holds us back academically and socially. Usually procrastination is connected to our emotions which does not always have to be negative but can hold a restrain over ourselves and individual growth that is controlled by certain factors that trigger stress. Stress can be found in our daily lives such as school, homework, work, relationships (romantic, platonic, or family), and substance abuse that is thought of as an escape. Not being able to let go of the factors that restrain you as a person shows how much a person has been hurt in life either physically, socially, or emotionally. Another factor that is overlooked is abuse which is not always obvious but it can be detected through personal conversation or withdrawal in human connection and can be expressed in language subconsciously. For someone to push all that aside to focus on a task is a big accomplishment and is not appreciated enough. Every human being struggles with something and is usually not a topic that is revealed easily but can redemption can be shown in academic participation and social activity which is why education is cherished.

Review from Brooke S. and Matheus
==== We believe your wiki addition has great potential, that being said, you have some things to work on. Firstly, developing a wiki "tone" to this piece. It sounds as though you are writing from your own thoughts, not in a professional tone. There are also no current citations, which are important to add here as to credit where these points have come from and make the wiki page even more credible once you add them! Good Luck! ====

Review from Caleb and Amanda
==== We think that you should work on making your writing sound more wikipedia-ish also you need to cite a source.

Review from Colleen
====I am kind of confused on if this is your full addition, or if some was from the wiki article already. Try to make the addition sound more official and use 'wiki' words. As they stated you need citations, but also maybe add less sentences that sound more of an opinion rather than facts. Good job though!