User talk:VegettaDaGoat/Stefano Langone/Bibliography

Preliminary Review from Kaylea
Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing. You'll notice this is a little bit form-letter-ish but I hope it is still helpful!

I see you've made some changes and are starting to incorporate elements from our training, but there's still a ways to go with this article. I know we met about this today and I don't want to over-emphasize the points from our discussion. We can keep checking in as you make progress.

One thing I notice is that you are writing your article in the Bibliography page. You will want to copy the live article from Wikipedia into your sandbox in its own page. This Bibliography page is only for notes.

The article lives here while you are drafting it: User:VegettaDaGoat/Stefano Langone.

Kaylea Champion (talk) 07:25, 27 January 2022 (UTC)