User talk:Vejlefjord/Old age - draft

I am an 89 year old novice Wikipedian who has delved into the literature about old age. As I see them, my draft edits of Old age (1) respect text written by former editors, (2) add inline citations as the tag calls for, (3) sharpen the focus on “old age” and not the process of Ageing, (4) increase coherence, (5) add new information, and (5) remove excessive hyperlinks. If you can offer advice or assistance, please let me know. Vejlefjord (talk) 20:09, 13 December 2013 (UTC)