User talk:Venuseperry

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David Huffman (artist) article
Hi Venuseperry (and Professor Duffield ) Nice work tracking down that info about Huffman's mother, Venuseperry! I have a few suggestions. First, please move the info from the top of the article to the correct section. Then, you will also want to rewrite so that your addition is integrated into the article. What I mean is, rather than saying "I found out..." it would be just the "his mother was the main artist for the black panthers" part, with a citation. Give it a try and I'll check back later to see how it looks. Happy editing! Circa73 (talk) 17:03, 16 November 2017 (UTC)