User talk:Vewalke/sandbox

I think you did a great job of condensing the studies you are talking about to fit Wiki format. If I were you, I would add another sentence explaining what exactly the BOLD response is (right now, it seems like you just talk about which brain regions are involved with it). Also, in the fifth study comparing gender differences, it is unclear how alcohol fit into the actual study (you mentioned in your notes that alcohol was consumed prior to the study, maybe include this in the article as well). Lastly, in your citations, I think you have the same study cited twice for consecutive sentences (number 4 and 5). Alivia McAee (talk) 00:37, 22 September 2016 (UTC)Alivia McAtee