User talk:Vferreiraa12/Blue jellyfish

Hello Victoria! I wanted to let you know that I provided a peer review to your article that is now posted if you would like to read it.

Dr. White's critique of your first draft
Article body It is more likely to find these jellyfish in the warmer months across the UK coast [this is already in the article].[1] They drift closer to the shore to catch the large abundance of plankton with their tentacles. '''Their tentacles will sting to capture their prey. [this is already in the article].''' Blue jellyfish age can be identified by color of their bell. They tend to be pale in appearance when young, but mature to have a brightly purple-blue (some yellow) colored bell. (what is their general life span? what about the environment can affect this?). '''These species do not inhabit areas near the ocean floor, and instead are seen swimming in open waters nearer to the surface. [this is already in the article-that is what pelagic means]'''.[2] Although it is similar to the lion's mane jellyfish, the blue jellyfish is not as large, and has a translucent bell.[3]

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[1] "Blue jellyfish | The Wildlife Trusts". www.wildlifetrusts.org. Retrieved 2021-10-12. [2] "MarLIN - The Marine Life Information Network - Blue jellyfish (Cyanea lamarckii)". www.marlin.ac.uk. Retrieved 2021-10-12. [3] "Jellyfish superstars you can spot on UK shores". Marine Conservation Society. Retrieved 2021-10-12. "The Wildlife Trusts | The Wildlife Trusts". www.wildlifetrusts.org. Retrieved 2021-10-12. "MarLIN - The Marine Life Information Network - Blue jellyfish (Cyanea lamarckii)". www.marlin.ac.uk. Retrieved 2021-10-12. "Jellyfish superstars you can spot on UK shores". Marine Conservation Society. Retrieved 2021-10-12.

'''Overall you did a great job. You added a lot of good information to the article. Nice addition of an image and GREAT job with in text citations and links. Your peer reviews have a few good suggestions as well.''' Whiteamphipod (talk) 16:16, 22 October 2021 (UTC)