User talk:Vianrahman

Your submission at Articles for creation: Hemin Hawrami has been accepted
 Hemin Hawrami, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. If your account is more than four days old and you have made at least 10 edits you can create articles yourself without posting a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for Creation if you prefer. Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Bkissin (talk) 14:03, 21 August 2019 (UTC)
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Chonee, ! Welcome to Wikipedia. Hemin Hawrami is definitely notable enough to have a Wikipedia article, but we also are suspicious of those who have a conflict of interest or who are trying to promote a particular subject. Thank you for declaring your COI on your user page. The article seems pretty good so far, but it needs to cut down on some of the "fluff". Take a look at Manual of Style/Words to watch as you continue to edit the page. Try to avoid phrases like Hawrami was academically bright and achieved high grades, Hawrami was known among the senior levels of the KDP as a sharp thinker, a very good English speaker and linguist, which helped him to secure work or He said that as a teenager he did not want to miss out on the historic events of the uprising. Unless of course you can find actual reliable sources that actually say those points. Keep up the good work, and reach out for help at WikiProject Kurdistan or to an experienced editor! Bkissin (talk) 15:09, 22 August 2019 (UTC)

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