User talk:Vickeroodle/SandboxSeaSpray

Sea Spray Peer Review

 * I think your introductory paragraph should talk about why we care about sea spray.
 * You don't have much linked, and I think it could be cool to link certain concepts (if you can) such as "Sea Spray Aerosols"
 * Make a references header and link your references
 * Make sure you cite every sentence
 * I would break up your larger sections into ones to have subsections, esp. with the formation section
 * Link words or phrases instead of putting them in parentheses (see: sensible heat and latent heat)
 * Doesn't seem to be an order of significance here. Is climate interaction arguably more important than ecology? I'm, not sure but if you think it is I would put it before ecology
 * I think if you keep talking about SSA it might be useful to spell it out when put in various sections.


 * Very interesting topic! Nice work.

KirstenSteinke (talk) 23:19, 19 November 2018 (UTC)KirstenSteinke