User talk:Victor.cardenas2207

You need to add an intro to Draft:Edward Myles Chism
Please do not just start in chronological order; the first paragraph should tell us precisely what he is famous for. He's not famous for being born, so there's no point leading with that fact.

Please add a WP:Lead section at the start of your draft, which in just one or two sentences sums up the most noteworthy features of his career, what he's famous for. MatthewVanitas (talk) 18:10, 6 February 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Edward Myles Chism (February 21)
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Onel5969 (talk) 23:45, 21 February 2015 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Edward Myles Chism


Hello, Victor.cardenas2207. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled "Edward Myles Chism".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo (talk) 16:17, 11 September 2015 (UTC)