User talk:Victoria.grayce/ projectdraft

This is a start, but your current content is well below the first benchmark for content. Keep up the work and start adding content. Mosterbur (talk) 15:43, 20 October 2018 (UTC)Mosterbur

Project Review from Shelby Alessandroni
The sections you have added on different psychologists are very clear and well written. You added some great information to the section on the psychology of learning that really helped introduce the topic. I did not come across any spelling errors. I like that you are diving deeper into the psychology of learning and adding more sections that will provide a better understanding for readers. You added some good sources, but I believe this topic would benefit from some more scholarly/reliable sources. Thank you so much for your feedback! I do agree that my page could use some more sources, I will find some and get them added!

Review
As I read through your edits to your page I noted that you said POL multiple times in your first paragraph. I would take a look at it and then remove a few of the ones that are unnecessary. Also I would added an out link to "Growth mindset" to inform your reader on what it is. Thank you for your feedback! You make some valid points and I will edit those on my page!