User talk:VictoriaNorth91/Effects of stress on memory/Gen Wood Peer Review

Thank you, GenWood, for reviewing our article, “The Effects of Stress on Memory”. Your feedback was helpful as it helped us gain insights into the direction we are going in making the necessary improvements on our article. You’re the second reviewer thus far to give us feedback concerning the content of our Lead, and how it does indeed summarize and support the information contained within our article. Per Wikipedia’s recommendations that is exactly what a good Lead should do. Your feedback has helped us understand that our article has other areas that need improvement more so than our Lead. You’d mentioned that our article “...goes to much into stress by itself and the hormones that are released instead of focusing on the main topic which is how it affects memory”, and we agree with you. This is why we have chosen to write a new section based on stress and short term memory as a means to enhance our article rather than spend time revising the older sections. Moving forward our team, UVUduoWiki, plans to add citations and improve the few syntactical errors that remain as well as adding our section on stress and short term memory. VictoriaNorth91 (talk) 05:02, 28 October 2019 (UTC)