User talk:Victoriapelky/sandbox

I think it would be beneficial if you extended your research to a few more sources to give yourself a little more variety. More references would help verify and diversify your article giving it more context. The links worked, and are reliable sources. Perhaps you could look for a few more academic sources to give the article more context and variety. There are just a few small spelling mistakes I noticed. The "Life After the Rebellion" point 1. just needs a change from "after a miraculous recovery her changes her name to" to "she". Aside from that, you are off to a great start. By expanding your research base I think you will make great headway in completing the final draft!

Hi! I think that your article is coming along nicely! I really like the way that you broke your topic down into subheadings, they are well selected and appropriate to your topic. You've done a good job citing your information but I think you could benefit from some more sources, I'm sure as your article progresses you will add more sources to your work. Your intro paragraph is well done! It does have a couple grammatical errors, in the second sentence you have "fro" written rather than "for". Also when referring to the Catholic Church (and usually Christianity) both words should be capitalized, I did notice that you capitalize it in a different section so just make sure to be consistent. GeorginaLW (talk) 05:06, 17 February 2018 (UTC)