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Feedback on Methylobacterium extorquans article
In the genetic section, you say the organism consists of a chromosome. This terminology is a little problematic because consists makes it sound like the chromosome is the only cellular component. Also, you refer to a function being encoded by genes. Can you add more detail about what those genes encode for? Is it a particular enzyme that is part of a particular metabolic cycle? Eswanner (talk) 16:34, 23 September 2020 (UTC)
 * "M. extroquens has been found having a mutualistic relationship with strawberries that changes the flavor.[11] If introduced to blooming plants, furaneol production increases, changing the way the strawberry tastes.[11] " You could keep ref 11 at the end only; also deleted "that changes the flavor" in first sentence as it is redundant with end of second sentence.Eswanner (talk) 17:58, 23 September 2020 (UTC)