User talk:Vidyabhargava/Redlining

See full comments on the google docgoogle doc. Quick summary: I think this is great addition to the page! Lead section + clear structure: This section is easy to understand and has a clear structure. Balance coverage + neutrality: As mentioned in the comments I think there is that one section that could use reshaping to make sure you stay neutral- see my comment on the "It is important that..." sentence. It may also be beneficial to add an opposing research perspective if that exists (those who claim no correlation or different causes, etc.) Reliable: Sources that you do have seem great! I think there is one place where a source could be added/clarified which source you are referring to, as noted in the comments. Mkf51 (talk) 18:30, 8 April 2024 (UTC)