User talk:VikkiX/Miaohui

Violetzq (talk) 22:13, 31 January 2020 (UTC)I really like all the new information that you added for this topic you chose. I noticed that the original article did not have much content besides the leading section. I really like how you added the specific date and history for this particular Chinese activity. I also learned a lot from the activity section. I found it especially useful that you added information about other countries that also have Miaohui, and their unique activities. The tones are also relevantly neutral. My advice is that you can make some changes to the leading section, and give a guideline that includes each of the sections that you plan to introduce later. Also, I think that the contents are relevant to the topic, but you can consider rearranging the sequence of each section so that there can be connections between each section. For example, I think the “See Also” section can be put as the sub-section below “Outside China Mainland”