User talk:Villegasa/sandbox

Alex's Peer Review
General: Your article seems to have a decent amount of information on it and you've mainly been adding citations and some information that wasn't in the article before. I feel like it could use some more things or make sure that the stuff you add is bolded or what not. I also feel like you should cite thew things in your sandbox so you know you have enough citations and you use all your sources.

New Information: You've added a bit of new information to the article in bold, I'm not sure if that's all, because of the large section at the end titled Notes For Use. I'd personally add a bit more, or solidify what is yours and what was in the original article.

Citations: You seem to have a good amount of sources, but you didn't cite them in your sandbox, so I dont know if you've used all of them.