User talk:Vilocity

If you're trying to avoid sounding like a marketing piece, I would avoid a sentence like the "company's operation model was based on the recognition that carriers at 60 Hudson Street in New York required a network-neutral alternative to procuring local loops within the building for connectivity."

Intlawprof (talk) 23:16, 18 August 2010 (UTC)

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I replied to your request for feedback. I hope it's helpful! Chevy monte  carlo  - alt 10:30, 19 August 2010 (UTC)

Proposed deletion of Prentke Romich Company


The article Prentke Romich Company has been proposed for deletion&#32; because of the following concern:
 * I think this is pretty much a straight advert with lots of other problems as well - I've done my best a couple of times, but maybe it's best to delete and start again at some point in the future...

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Proposed deletion of Language acquisition through motor planning


The article Language acquisition through motor planning has been proposed for deletion&#32; because of the following concern:
 * Adverty, orphaned, largely taken from various pages on http://www.aacandautism.com/lamp (but I can find no copy and paste, to be fair).

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