User talk:Vincent60030/Archive 8

Request on 08:32:59, 28 February 2018 for assistance on AfC submission by Tiptoptop
Reason for rejection?

Thank you for taking the time to look at the submitted article.

I cannot see any difference between our page and other accepted pages such as https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/International_School_of_Nanshan_Shenzhen school.

The reason for providing this information: as a parent you are looking for a good school, and as a parent coming from a country other than China Wikipedia would be one of your sources.

As we are in China one should realize that a city like Shenzhen where SWIS happens to be located you talk about some 15 million people - so media coverage is of a different magnitude compared to other countries.

The only reason to create the article is that other international schools do have their presence and as a prospective parent all relevant information should be available for prospective parents in a similar situation.

- information provided is neutral - as a prospective parent I look for key information: international accreditation, facilities, student/ teacher ratio - all clearly stated in this article - I have attended events organized by different international schools in the area, and when talking to parents Shen Wai International School came up on a regular basis as one of the top schools

I followed your suggestions to find further references, but failed as Chinese is not a language I speak.

Can you provide any further suggestions please?Tiptoptop (talk) 08:32, 28 February 2018 (UTC) Tiptoptop (talk) 08:32, 28 February 2018 (UTC)
 * I'll look into it soon. But I did leave a comment on the draft. VKZY LUFan (talk) (Mind the Gap!) 07:38, 1 March 2018 (UTC)

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Titanic II
Hello, I'm Blue Riband. Thank you for tidying up Titanic II. I've removed the recent changes to "ship route" (speculative), "status" (has not really changed since 2014), and the good-faith sourced statement about the European office (publicity). We've had some good-faith edits recently that all involve publicity but no real concrete progress on the actual building of the ship itself. It might help to read the comments of other editors at Talk:Titanic II to understand the context and past vandalism issues. Given this past history, the editorial consensus to date is to leave the project status blank until we see some real concrete progress on actually building the ship. This would be a formal signed contract with a shipyard. Such an event would have generated considerable media attention.

If you have any questions contact me on my talk page or you can add your own comments at Talk:Titanic II. Blue Riband► 15:46, 23 October 2018 (UTC)


 * Oh thanks for informing. Cheers mate! VKZY LUFan (talk) (Mind the Gap!) 22:39, 23 October 2018 (UTC)

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I've added more to the Draft:Terry Albury.216.248.99.93 (talk) 23:12, 14 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Please check the latest comments for your submission. I’m so sorry for the late reply as I have been busy and sick lately. Keep up the good work :) Also feel free to create an account. It’s much better VKZY LUFan (talk) (Mind the Gap!) 14:52, 22 November 2018 (UTC)

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Request on 21:37:07, 25 November 2018 for assistance on AfC submission by Elise Furgurson
Hello I would love to have more of an explanation as to why my page was declines. All it said was refer to "what wikipedia is not" my article is called Contribution from Tourism and Travel to GDP by Country. I really need to know how I can improve it or get it accepted. Thank you

Elise Furgurson (talk) 21:37, 25 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Hey there =D sure np. The article right now looks more like a research report right now which doesn’t look like a Wikipedia article to me. More comments soon.  VKZY LUFan (talk) (Mind the Gap!) 22:49, 25 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Also the article rn doesn’t have a lead. See WP:Lead for further details. I think you know what’s a lead right? It’s just a section which summarises the whole article. But honestly, I feel like your topic isn’t that suitable for a wiki article. I’m not that experienced in AfC reviewing as well so I would ask for some second opinion here., could you?  VKZY LUFan (talk) (Mind the Gap!) 23:13, 25 November 2018 (UTC)


 * I've made some adjustments and than published the page. Legacypac (talk) 02:18, 26 November 2018 (UTC)
 * thx mate =D VKZY LUFan (talk) (Mind the Gap!) 02:19, 26 November 2018 (UTC)

Draft:Photoflood
I'm not sure how you can say that Photoflood bulbs are not notable. Just about any supplier that sells light bulbs of any description also sells photoflood bulbs (See here) so there must be a high usage of them. You might just as well claim that Compact fluorescent lamps or LED bulbs are not notable. I actually created the article in response to a number of red links throughout Wikipedia attempting to link to such an article. DocFergus (talk) 14:59, 26 November 2018 (UTC)
 * I see that you are trying to put in effort. But It’s not just about trying to fix red links and create new articles just like that. Then I might as well just create an article for every single station and write content which describes nothing about it. It’s about quality, not quantity my dear friend. Also in regards to your draft, I have seen 0, and I mean 0 secondary sources that’ll prove that it is notable. And pls see WP:INHERIT. The other subjects or species of its own kind are notable doesnt mean it’ll be notable too. Your friend is notable doesn’t mean that you are notable. Everything is rather standalone here I’m afraid which i’ll have to deal with too. Hope this helps :) keep up the good work though VKZY LUFan (talk) (Mind the Gap!) 15:05, 26 November 2018 (UTC)
 * A photoflood bulb is just an ordinary tungsten bulb that's being run at a higher supply voltage - e.g. a 110 V bulb run at 230 V. You get more light, but a shorter life. -- Red rose64 &#x1f339; (talk) 21:50, 26 November 2018 (UTC)

Walshina
Just a note - all accepted taxonomic groups above the subspecies level are considered prima facie notable, unless there are quite specific concerns (e.g., possible hoax, classification contested etc.). So if an article on a genus (fossil or recent) like Walshina comes your way, if it has even a single reliable reference to a scientific database or a journal article, it's good to go in as a stub. Cheers -- Elmidae (talk · contribs) 10:13, 27 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Ah, thanks. I missed that out :) VKZY LUFan (talk) (Mind the Gap!) 10:55, 27 November 2018 (UTC)

Reverted edits on Ampang and Sri Petaling lines and Sungai Buloh-Kajang line
Hi there. You recently undid some edits that I have made on the pages stated above, citing them as not encyclopedic. Could you please explain to me what does that mean and why those edits are not acceptable? Thank you. :) Draco97 (talk) 12:15, 27 November 2018 (UTC)
 * WP:NOTAGUIDE can help you on this. I have already included that in the edit summary. Things such as platform type are actually trivial. This is a universal encyclopedia, not a dictionary that caters to every sort of enthusiast. You can refer to good articles such as Victoria line and Hammersmith & City line as an example. Hope this would help u. Tq so much! happy editing :) I apologise if I sounded a bit frustrated. I have to deal with this a lot. VKZY LUFan (talk) (Mind the Gap!) 12:19, 27 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Ah I see. Thank you very much. And no worries. I was actually making those edits to standardise the information on the pages with other lines in the Klang Valley Integrated Transit system, such as the Kelana Jaya line, Seremban Line and Port Klang Line. I thought it would be a good thing if they all had consistent information since this rail networks are integrated and the articles are related to one another. But thank you again for the clarification. :) Draco97 (talk) 12:33, 27 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Yeah go ahead and standardise with the correct format I told you :) I haven't had the time to VKZY LUFan (talk) (Mind the Gap!) 12:36, 27 November 2018 (UTC)

Hey!
I have just noticed you declined Draft:Ponomarev Dmitry Grigorievich. As another AfC reviewer, I have rewritten the article a bit to go along with the Warheroes and Flot sources. I am not sure what would I have done if I decided before you did. On the one side, the sourcing is still very poor (on the level of moderate biography for both) but on the other side 1 source there says he won awards like Order of Lenin and Hero of the Soviet Union, which should make him pass WP:ANYBIO, am I right? Jovanmilic97 (talk) 08:33, 28 November 2018 (UTC)
 * I’m not sure myself since I’m new but I’m aware that there’s another criteria for this which is WP:Military. VKZY LUFan (talk) (Mind the Gap!) 08:48, 28 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Just checked it, and yeah he passes it as well per WP:SOLDIER. Were awarded their nation's highest award for valour. In Russia that is Hero of the Russian Federation https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Template:Highest_gallantry_awards, and in the article it says it is a successor of Hero of the Soviet Union which he won. Guess I will accept the article then? Jovanmilic97 (talk) 09:20, 28 November 2018 (UTC)
 * haha up to u! But erm for me I find the primary sources not convincing that’s all. I’m quite strict when it comes to BLPs hahaha. VKZY LUFan (talk) (Mind the Gap!) 11:48, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

Advertising decline on a dead scientist?
Really? Did you hit the wrong button on Draft:Béla_Harkányi or you just don't know what you are doing at AfC? Legacypac (talk) 16:30, 28 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Could have been both actually. Well if it reads like an advertisement to me of course I’ll put it as a reason. I’m sorry if my way of reviewing isn’t really that well. I’m trying my best. I don’t like to just simply click buttons and make people unhappy so not to worry too much. But if u wanna give me better tutoring on reviewing I don’t mind :) VKZY LUFan (talk) (Mind the Gap!) 22:27, 28 November 2018 (UTC)