User talk:Vincentapowell

Asynchronos business model
Hi, thanks for working in WP. You submitted your draft on this business model already for inclusion in WP, I hope you are aware that it has in this form 0 chances to pass. You need to work on the article substantially: you need to find around one dozen reliable good sources describing and backing this approach. Good examples (well known comapnies and businesses) and usage of this model is helpful too. cheers and good luck Shaddim (talk) 12:46, 26 May 2017 (UTC) PS: I can help you with formating if you have enough material

Your submission at Articles for creation: Asynchronous Business Model (May 26)
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CHRISSY MAD ❯❯❯  ¯\_(ツ)_/¯  13:25, 26 May 2017 (UTC)

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