User talk:Violinistbio

Your submission at Articles for creation
 You recently made a submission to Articles for Creation. Your article has been reviewed and because some issues were found, it could not be accepted in its current form; it is now located at Wikipedia&. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. Feel free to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved. (You can do this by adding the text to the top of the article.) Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Topher385 (talk) 05:05, 6 August 2011 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.
 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, you can find it at Wikipedia&.
 * To edit the submission, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, or on the [ reviewer's talk page] . Please remember to link to the submission!
 * You can also get live chat help from experienced editors.
 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! FoCuSandLeArN (talk) 22:31, 28 March 2013 (UTC)

Help
I see you have been making improvements to your proposed article on Mercedes Chang (who I assume is your daughter or something).

A few suggestions :


 * I think it is clear that the subject does meet the criteria for an article in wikipedia, but the article must be written to meet wikipedia standards.
 * In particular, everything must be sourced directly to a reliable source (newspaper, magazine, etc)
 * this should not be a problem, as from looking at her site, she has been the subject of numerous articles.
 * Use Help:Footnotes citations to help identify which sources are used to backup which statements.
 * Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, not a marketing brochure. The style of the article you have written sounds like an advertisement, not an encyclopedia. The tone needs to come way down, almost clinical. There is way too much use of WP:PEACOCK words.
 * You may be better served by writing a minimal WP:STUB article first, to get the article created, and then expand it slowly with well sourced content.
 * Be careful, it is somewhat clear that you have a Conflict of Interest with the subject. While that does not mean you cannot edit the article about here, Wikipedia does frown on WP:Autobiography articles, and your actions will be subject to additional scrutiny due to the conflict of interest.

Here is an article I wrote, of another child musician which you may want to use as a template. Joshua_Coyne, note in particular that it is focusing on facts, rather than various opinions and statements that have been made about the subject.

If you have any questions, you may reply here. Gaijin42 (talk) 14:19, 1 April 2013 (UTC)

Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Mercedes Cheung (Zhang) Canadian Chinese Violinist concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Mercedes Cheung (Zhang) Canadian Chinese Violinist, a page you created, has not been edited in 6 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

You may request Userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

If the deletion has already occured, instructions on how you may be able to retrieve it are available at WP:REFUND/G13.

Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 02:00, 30 September 2013 (UTC)

Your draft article, Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Mercedes Cheung (Zhang) Canadian Chinese Violinist


Hello Violinistbio. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled "Mercedes Cheung (Zhang) Canadian Chinese Violinist".

The page will shortly be deleted. If you plan on editing the page to address the issues raised when it was declined and resubmit it, simply and remove the  or  code. Please note that Articles for Creation is not for indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you want to retrieve it, copy this code:, paste it in the edit box at this link , click "Save", and an administrator will in most cases undelete the submission.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. HasteurBot (talk) 21:52, 18 January 2014 (UTC)