User talk:Vivehoadie

First Message
Welcome to Wikipedia friend.TeaglesCS (talk) 17:52, 19 February 2016 (UTC)

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Yo it's marv from class Tessiro (talk) 17:54, 19 February 2016 (UTC)

Welcome!
Hello, Vivehoadie, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer Review #1
The article is well organized into sections and subsections which makes it easy to navigate and comprehend. The first paragraph does a good job giving an overview of what micronization is. There could be more info on the modern techniques such as how they were developed. There seems to be a large gap between the traditional and modern techniques sections as far as the development of the process. In general the modern techniques section could be reworded in more simple terms; I am somewhat familiar with the terminology used and I had to reread this sections a few times to understand it. You may also consider adding a see also section. O&#39;DwyerC (talk) 11:29, 30 March 2016 (UTC)