User talk:Vkberndt/sandbox

It appears you plan to add some great information to the existing article! I agree that the list of awards and accomplishments is phenomenal and extensive, so I think you are on the right track to add what you described in order to balance the page well. As far as the pictures, I didn't see any when I looked at the existing Wiki page on Bonnie Bassler... I may be missing these pictures if something just hasn't been published yet. The sources you have added look credible, and the layout is also easily readable. I would encourage you to continue to look into her research as well as early life to help readers understand more about Bonnie Bassler and what lead her to where she is today. Geboenke18 (talk) 15:56, 27 February 2020 (UTC)

I like that there is information being added to her page about her research and details about her research because there is not much about in on her wiki page right now. I think that there could be a little more information added on her wiki page about her personal life, but I think that the research will be an important aspect to add. A picture of Bonnie Bassler would be a good thing to add also! Cnpollard (talk) 19:45, 27 February 2020 (UTC)

I have completed the peer review for this article. Great overall start, maybe add some more content (but I do know this is a draft). — Preceding unsigned comment added by Scmccray18 (talk • contribs) 00:52, 2 March 2020 (UTC)

Peer review
Overall, this is a very good contribution to an already strong article. Your inclusion of Bassler's research focuses and detailed description of her work makes the article more complete. I would recommend adding a photo and would maybe consider deleting the section called "Bassler's Research" in the final draft. The article already listed numerous sources, so that's great that you were able to contribute a few newer references to the bibliography.

Keep up the great work! Tbronson16 (talk) 02:57, 2 March 2020 (UTC)tbronson16

Here is the link to my peer review (if it works): https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Vkberndt/Bonnie_Bassler/Tbronson16_Peer_Review