User talk:VmillerB/sandbox

Great job with neutral tone! The new sectioning is much easier to understand and the syntax makes it very readable. Sources have to be formatted, but there seem to be enough of them. The links to other wikipedia articles are helpful. It might be a bit more clear to change the title of "subsequent applications" to something a bit more descriptive. Alexxias (talk) 16:27, 18 November 2019 (UTC)