User talk:Vnicolet/Alessandro Leopardi

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Nice work on your draft. Some things going forward
 * 1) Make sure that everything you add to the article is supported by a reliable source, and that readers can easily connect each statement to the source that supports in. In practice, that means that anything you add either has to have a source immediately after the sentence or paragraph, or that the reference that follows it must support the statement.
 * 2) Make sure that your tone is appropriate for an encyclopedia article. For example, the tone of sentence is too conversational for an encyclopedia article: This signature slowly caused the people of Venice to forget that Verrocchio was the one who won the competition and begin the statue. Many Venetians even began to forget his name all together.
 * 3) Be careful about time-bound statements. For example, you wrote: Today, many still think the statue was created solely by Leopardi, but in an undated article that's likely to evolve over time, "today" is nebulous. It's an even bigger problem when you use a source that's over 50 years old to support a statement about "today".
 * 4) Rather than saying Cardinal Zeno (AKA Cardinal Giovanni Battista Zeno) just say Cardinal Giovanni Battista Zeno. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:34, 8 December 2020 (UTC)