User talk:Vorchri

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Stub
What you have is still a stub. It needs a proper introduction, like the one the person after you created, and subsections. Go in and add headings to help clariy the different points.

I don't know what the comment means about this being copied from an essay. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Lyco Hist 232 (talk • contribs) 20:14, 21 March 2008 (UTC)