User talk:Voxinsocks

2020 JNU Attack
Thank you for your copy edit on the Guild of Copy Editors request for the article 2020 JNU Attack. The edits you made certainly improved the article.

If you want to look at the copy edits I made, simply click on "View History" and you can scroll your way through each part of the article to see them. For the most part my edits involved adding missing articles like "the", using more appropriate words and so forth.

The one Manual of Style issue I thought I'd draw to your attention is writing out times. The MOS suggests time be written like this - 2:00 p.m. The  prevents a line break on the screen so that the numbers are not broken up. If you're writing about a range of time you can omit the first a.m. or p.m. - 6:00 to 7:00 a.m.

It might be helpful as you edit to read a paragraph out loud after you've edited it. You will often hear "mistakes" that you might just miss reading from a screen.

Thanks again for your help with the article.

Happy editing,

Twofingered Typist (talk) 13:08, 15 January 2020 (UTC)

Coordinator, GOCE

January 2020 GOCE drive bling
Thanks for helping to bring the copy-editing backlog to a record low! – Reidgreg (talk) 17:02, 10 February 2020 (UTC)