User talk:Vre99/Positive psychology

I can see that you are putting a lot of focus towards research in your contribution in this article. Also, you bring up a great point in your contribution, but you may want to find a way to elaborate on and explain the point you are addressing. Doing so, you should be able to work in the source you’ve found as citations. Sey2020 (talk) 20:07, 18 June 2021 (UTC)

Thank you so much for your feedback! I learned about positive psychology in a course I took previously, but I am finding that it is not as easy to research as I thought. I seem to find sources that have already been used in the article. After reading your review, I have reread both sources I included in my contribution. I am working on ways to elaborate and explain what I am trying to say without confusing readers. I also need to focus on how I word things so that I do not accidentally use the same sentence structure. I appreciate your kindness and you taking the time to read my work and review it. Vre99 (talk) 02:32, 27 June 2021 (UTC)