User talk:Vreynoso/sandbox

TA Comments:

In-text citations: yes

Professional tone: yes

Paraphrasing real science: yes

Grammar and spelling: overall good

Links to other wiki articles: yes

Score: 20/20

Peer Review:

This is a good draft describing the awards Davisson received. It breaks down the work of Davisson into a language any reader can understand. This way the reader can understand exactly what Davisson was awarded for. There were some grammatical errors, so those should be addressed. More sentences could be cited throughout the paragraphs. Some sentences could be condensed to form one sentence, which would make the content less wordy and more concise. It might also help with the flow of the writing.

LIN, BERNICE Peer Review: 20/20