User talk:Vvengsarkar/Sheehan's syndrome/Vvengsarkar Peer Review

I am reviewing Sheehan's Syndrome as part of my peer review. I believe the lead section of the article is not very thorough and needs to go into further detail by expanding on more relevant information. The lead also does not reflect the most important information from the article. The organization of the article is good since each subtopic is self-contained and presented in a logical fashion. I believe that some specific sections like treatment/epidemiology are not as expansive as it could be and might be lacking important viewpoints of the medical community. All of the information appears to be presented in a neutral fashion and does not seem to be biased or favoring a perspective over others. The content of this article is generally brief but the information presented could be written better to ensure that ideas flow logically. Images are also lacking and could be important in portraying certain aspects of treatment or signs/symptoms. The references seem to be up-to-date and based on trustworthy secondary sources. Vvengsarkar (talk) 21:21, 1 February 2020 (UTC)