User talk:Vvgarz16/sandbox

So, I like what you have going here. Make sure that you post your sources in the Sandbox just so you know and others know where you are drawing things from. I really like the distinction you make between how imposter syndrome affects men and women differently. You should try to elaborate on that a little bit more. Also in your sentence about reality and fantasy, a better sentence would be: "They have a hard time in differentiating reality from fantasy." Instead of what you wrote which was: "They have a hard time to differentiate reality and fantasy." The grammar you used there was just a little awkward. I really like where you are taking your topic so keep developing it.

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Valerie: This looks like a great outline of your two articles. Do make sure that you cite your sources so that your reader (even just me/your peers) know where you are getting this information from. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mbrzycki (talk • contribs) 22:49, 25 March 2019 (UTC)