User talk:Vwaller1/Monument of Aemilius Paullus/Avamilazzo Peer Review

Hi Victoria,

I have not researched this topic so I don't know how difficult it is to find info about it but I do think it would be good for you to add more text about the grounding and include more sources. I see that you have mainly used two sources (yellow and green) but the other sources are used for a couple words such as " parallels" and " Local". I would try to dig a bit more into these other resources and add more context from them. I think the section you contributed it clear and definitely adds to the grounding of the piece.