User talk:Vwang2019/sandbox

The 'Development and Production' section is very clear and informative, I think it will be a great addition to the article. The section about the make-up process was very interesting and well-written. I think that including some information about critical response to the film and the general audience's review/response to the film under the release sections would be beneficial. Also, you could include some information about the director if it's relevant and maybe you could add an 'Awards' section if the film or any of the cast or crew won prizes for the film. You have a lot of good sources and cite them well in the text. Looking at the article itself, I think it could benefit from some expansion on the details of the plot.


 * sorry, I uploaded this on the wiki ed website insted, my bad.

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Thank you for the comments! I will look into including some information about the critical response to the film; I had originally wanted to include a section but had difficulty finding reputable sources up to Wiki standards. However, I'm hoping to find some more information about general audience's review/response to the film. I'd like to look more into demographics of the audience and what public perception was in general of the film's portrayal of family. I don't believe the film won any standard show awards but I do believe there was one award received at a film festival that I will include. I'll look into expanding the plot with a bit more detail as well. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Vwang2019 (talk • contribs) 15:39, 29 November 2018 (UTC)