User talk:WCCWCCWCC/sandbox

Good progress on this draft! You provide a lot of evidence supporting the existence of the Older Dryas. I have a few comments. Firstly, make sure that your references are properly cited in the format Wikipedia requires. Second, continue to work on the organization and detail of your paper, such that the reader can be guided by the structure and logic of your writing. Finally, when introducing short forms of words for the first time, make sure that you write the full word followed by the short form in parentheses (e.g. northwest (NW)). Keep up the good work!

Well structured and informative article so far! This article is well organized between the different evidence of the Older Dryas using relative and academic sources. Make sure the evidence being presented is flowing together and not so choppy. You want to be informative while still connecting ideas. Overall a very interesting topic and informative article, great work! Billyolds (talk) 04:55, 9 April 2018 (UTC) Billyolds