User talk:WECIU?

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--Steven Fruitsmaak (Reply) 19:40, 11 August 2008 (UTC)

Temporal lobe epilepsy
Dear Sir,

based on my recent contributions, you sent me an e-mail about temporal lobe epilepsy, human herpesvirus 6 and febrile convulsions. We can both agree that epilepsy is just one of the many fields of health topics on this site in dire need of more attention.

I removed this section from the introduction at Epilepsy; this was probably giving an unconfirmed theory undue weight. I spent my evening researching this interesting topic (the reason why I contribute: to learn from it!), and summarised it in the main article on temporal lobe epilepsy (see Temporal lobe epilepsy).

Because you're not medically trained, I think your feedback could be particularly helpful to clear this section from any excessive WP:JARGON, which we strive to avoid per our style guide for medical articles. I would really appreciate if you could copy-edit the section for easier understanding, or if you would raise issues on the article's talk page if all is not clear (even after 3 months in the NHS, my English is not up to native speaker status).

Also, come have a look at WikiProject medicine, where you can meet our other contributors. There is a small group of interested volunteers at WikiProject Neurology.

kindest regards,

--Steven Fruitsmaak (Reply) 19:50, 11 August 2008 (UTC)