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Friday Homework; Edit article 7-Eleven
In first paragraph, I would like to change the comma after the word "Texas" to a period. In the next sentence I would like to delete the word "where" thus starting the next sentence with "The". WTR.Monkey (talk) 22:14, 6 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Approved. Josef Horáček (talk) 21:48, 7 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Did you forget to make the edit? Josef Horáček (talk) 22:23, 17 February 2015 (UTC)

Assignment 2
Article with not enough sources: Hydrogen fuel.

Sources:, , , WTR.Monkey (talk) 06:57, 12 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Good article and excellent sources. Josef Horáček (talk) 23:49, 12 February 2015 (UTC)

Assignment 3
Article needing lead section: Flight dynamics

WTR.Monkey (talk) 05:29, 23 February 2015 (UTC)

Assignment 3 Article Analysis
The article I chose, Flight dynamics, is a summary of the flight dynamics of two types of vehicles, fixed-wing aircraft and spacecraft. The article only has two sections entitled "Aircraft" and "Spacecraft and Satellites". The two sections are short summaries of these main articles Flight dynamics (fixed-wing aircraft) and Flight dynamics (spacecraft) respectively. The information in the article is clear and summarized well. WTR.Monkey (talk) 23:15, 23 February 2015 (UTC)

Assignment 3 new lead
Adding to original lead.

In fixed-wing aircraft, there are three critical flight dynamic parameters. These parameters occur in three dimensions as angles of rotation about the vehicles center of mass. These angles are known as roll, pitch, and yaw.

Spacecraft flight dynamics involve 3 forces which are: propulsive (rocket engine), gravitational, and lift and drag (when traveling through the earths or any other celestial atmosphere). Because aerodynamic forces involved with spacecraft flight are very small, this leaves gravity as the dominant force.

WTR.Monkey (talk) 23:25, 27 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Good job so far. Proofread: add apostrophes where needed, spell out numeral ("three"), delete "which are" right after the numeral. Josef Horáček (talk) 05:09, 1 March 2015 (UTC)
 * Great job. Josef Horáček (talk) 12:44, 10 March 2015 (UTC)