User talk:Wadewitz/playground2

Suggestion
There is too much text in the second section - you need another section header. Awadewit (talk) 18:42, 3 February 2011 (UTC)


 * The scope of section 2 is well within the reader's ability to stay focused. Awadewit (talk) 18:45, 3 February 2011 (UTC)