User talk:Wagnerb95/sandbox

I'm a little confused by your article draft. It doesn't feel like you're writing about hypoesthesia - it feels like you're writing about a number of diseases that have it as a symptom, rather than about the condition itself.
 * You need to talk about what hypoesthesia is in the body of the article. Right now, you only mention that in the lead section. Since the lead section is supposed to summarize what's in the body of the article, you need to make sure that you have a more detailed section outside the lead. You also need sources for this section.
 * When you talk about diagnosis, your primary source probably shouldn't be about decompression sickness.
 * When you talk about diseases, make sure you link to the article about the disease. Include a brief summary of information here that's relevant to hypoesthesia, but don't go into things like the antibiotics used to treat a specific disease. Readers should be able to click through to the main article about the disease and learn more there. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk)


 * You might want to take a look at the vertigo - it's different in some key ways, but it might give you a sense of how you could take this forward. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:10, 5 April 2018 (UTC)