User talk:Wahey24/sandbox

Very straight to the point, and nicely written. My only concern is the Guru introduction because his work ties in on your point, but the person kind of come out of no where. I think you may want to address who he is or the work he does, so others can understand his relevance/importance to the subject. Alexis mumford (talk) 01:28, 21 April 2015 (UTC)